Okay so I wanted to start my first post with an original poem. My dream is to one day publish a book filled with poetry. I feel like good classical poetry is one thing that's slipping away. I want to be the first successful modern poet. (Along with my career of teaching high school English). So I wrote this poem on WWI. It was an assignment but I really put my heart into it... instead of doing the minimum of required work like I normally would. Anyways I tried to encompass a lot of the aspects on WWI in this poem, the gas, the misconceptions of the war from the old men sitting at home, and mainly the utter pointlessness of the war. The lines,
"But, no he’s fighting
for a purpose, his country,
fighting for honor,
nation’s pride, and dignity." shows the nationalism that led many soldiers during this war. In the poem I also discuss how the war seems never ending. I give my friend Becca Murdoch credit to the title...it was pretty clever! Hope you enjoy!
Different Eyes
“Onward, Onward!”
they cry,
yet who are they to
say?
They see not the
trenches where we lie,
They see not the
blood and fire,
They see not men
ripped by barbed wire.
And as endless moon
meets a never-ending day,
Old men sit back and
judge us in dismay.
They do not know,
they do not know,
How it feels watching
eyes glaze over, friend or foe,
They do not know the
never ending uncertainty,
on whether or not
we’ll return to family.
Beautiful land once
called home,
But countries, like
ravaged dogs,
at their mouths did
foam.
Brutal gases,
unanticipated fogs,
and inch by inch we
crawl,
hoping this bloody
war will end for all.
Love, love, please
return,
Please assure me of
this,
You will not break or
burn.
Please avow me this,
That if indeed guns
do hiss,
Please assure me you
will live in perfect bliss.
That you will feel
minimum pain,
that your life will
mean a greater gain.
Yet I feel so, so
alone,
Yet if for our
country your blood would atone,
I would have a sense
of peace.
Oh, if this war would
just cease.
“Daddy, daddy,”
please come back,
yet who is the man
she calls dad?
Only letters yellowed
by age in a stack,
tells her of what
she’s never had.
But, no he’s fighting
for a purpose, his country,
fighting for honor,
nation’s pride, and dignity.
Yet does honor mean
the loss of many a life,
Does pride mean
causing unnecessary strife?
Does a four year old
girl with bright blue eyes,
Losing her dad she
never knew,
Does that seem fair
to you?
No this belief in
honor, dignity, and pride,
Is just one of
Europe’s lies.
Smoke-filled, gray
skies,
Maggots, vermin,
ungodly flies,
Surround my every day
mind,
I go a bit mad, I
find.
The western
battlefield aglow,
the cannons behind us
began to blow.
Another endless night
leads into a never ending day,
The divine being
above, on his remote, hits replay.